Headline Revisions
I’m Absolutely Obsessed About
Fixing Your Humiliating Headline
This is embarrassing – but I will go out on a limb – just for you.
Here we go. (gulp)
My sales letters used to suck big time. They actually cost me money – thousands of dollars in fact. I was so bad at them that I went bankrupt twice trying to overcome the debt I racked up trying to fix them.
Then one day, I read that top copywriters like John Carlton, Dan Kennedy, Clayton Makepeace, and Brian Keith Voiles, spend hours (even days) crafting headlines.
That’s right – headlines!
So I decided to go to school on headlines.
Flash forward 3 years and my sales letters spit out cash like a busted ATM Machine. I’ve got headline fever friend and I’ve got it bad.
For every salesletter I write – I generate up to 150 headlines. 75 minimum. It’s a game to me. I keep writing headline after headline trying to find the exact one that will force readers to sign over every penny in their bank account.
I’m damaged goods.
The Good News is that You Can Harness My Headline OCD for your own benefit.
Here’s the deal:
I’m offering a Headline Revision Service.
Hire me and I will fix that eyesore you call a headline – pronto (in just 3 business days – many times quicker).
Here’s what I’ll do:
- Review your competition and see why they are kicking your butt
- Create 35-40 headlines and then pick the top 3 masterpieces
- Wrap them up and send them to you with -
- A quick cheat sheet on how to test them in Google Adwords
Here’s the Best Part…
I’ll guarantee that your new headlines will double your conversions (sales, sign-ups) within 30 days or you get your money back.
And, My Friend you get all this for just $97.
That’s all. You have absolutely nothing to lose. But you could be making a lot more money in just a few days.
Click Here to Get Your New Headline Now
Let’s make it happen.
Stan
P.S. By the way, $97 is laughable. You’ll make it back in 30 Day’s – so don’t beat yourself up over it. You and I both know that you probably can blow this type of money (on far less) in a weekend. Click Here to Get Your New headline
December 29th, 2009 in Services by admin | No comments
Autoresponder Series
An email autoresponder series is a sales letter delivered in chapters. Think of it as your product’s very own weekly sitcom. Each email can deliver a bit more of your story and your value proposition to your prospect.
Each autoresponder series that I craft has the following high-conversion elements:
Attention Getting Subject Lines
I’ll make sure that your email doesn’t get lost in a sea of me-too subject lines. I will work with you to find the hot-buttons that will tickle your prospect’s curiosity and get them to open your email
Teaser Email Copy
It doesn’t matter if your email is long or short – as long as it’s useful and memorable. I will use your sales letter benefits to craft a entertaining and compelling email that will get them to click to your website.
Simple and Enticing Call-To-Action
A simple “click here for more information” will not get the job done. I give careful attention to every element of your email including the call-to-action links. I’ll make sure that each link in your email is enticing and virtually begs to be clicked.
October 26th, 2009 in Services by admin | No comments
High Conversion Squeeze Pages
A name Squeeze Page is an excellent tool for collecting names and email addresses for your mailing list. Squeeze Pages work because they offer an ethical bribe – a high-value free gift in exchange for an email address for future messages.
I’ve designed high-conversion squeeze pages for clients with the following:
Benefit Focused Headlines
My headlines will attract attention and complete its primary mission – getting the prospect to read more!
Curiosity Tickling Benefit Bullets
Each bullet will raise the excitement and anticipation for your free offer.
High Performance Layout Recommendations
I’ve designed hundreds of squeeze pages and tracked their results. I’ll show you the little-known layout secrets that can turn a mediocre squeeze page into a list growing machine.
Although Squeeze Pages are easy to launch, they require the same attention, planning, and well-crafted copy used in sales letters.
October 26th, 2009 in Services, Squeeze Pages by admin | No comments
Salesletter Copywriting
20% of the Words in Your Salesletter Will Deliver 80% of Your Sales….
Do You Know What They Are?
This is the real reason why business owners hire me.
I eliminate the need for trial and error. I’ve done the hard work for you. I’ve studied and isolated the exact ingredients needed for sales producing letters.
Ironically, what I’ve found has little to do with Guru tricks like:
…Templated headlines in red type and big fonts (this helps but doesn’t insure great results)
…Fancy testimonial boxes (they do look great and help a bit but there’s more to testimonials than graphics)
…Eye-Popping header graphics…actually these can hurt your sales if not done correctly
and a list of other shenanigans that look great but deliver poor results.
What does work is simple.
Your copy must connect your prospects problem with your solution. It seems obvious in theory but devilishly hard to figure out in practice. Only experience, research, and a solid grasp of buyer psychology can crack the code. And…That’s what you get when you hire me.
I will:
- Help you discover the “hidden reason” why your prospect’s want your product
- I will show you how to push your prospects “buy now” button
- Together, we will craft an offer that will make your product too valuable to pass up
- I’ll show you how to use your sales letter to build your business and your sales and…
- You’ll get a well-written, entertaining, logical, and emotionally charged sales letter that will race your prospect from the headline and drop them breathlessly at the “Add to Cart” button eager to buy
We’ll have fun. You’ll make money.
You can see the proof for yourself here….
Plus you’ll save yourself a ton of time. Why learn from scratch – what I’ve spent the last decade researching, investigating, and testing for myself? I’m your short-cut to sales. And I’m ready to get started now.
October 26th, 2009 in Services by admin | No comments

